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(No stars - Didn't finish) Tipping Point

The Tipping Point: A mystery thriller full of intrigue about greed, fraud and murder... (International Mystery) (Volume 1) - Walter Danley

No rating – didn't finish it.

 

(This was a read-for-review)

 

I got to 25% of the Kindle copy of "Tipping Point", a corporate thriller set in the world of real estate before I stopped. It was fine for the most part before the 25%. For the most part...the rest of the time, it read like a first draft: There were tense changes, POV switches midway through paragraphs and numerous typos. A character on a ski slope inhales the "fridge mountain air"; a characters name is mis-spelled; There were sentences without a subject that made no sense.

 

A bigger problem was the telling and not showing, particularly of the love interest, who we were told was beautiful four times without being shown it once – having someone stare at her as she walked by, for instance.

 

The notes at the end made this clear that this was a revision of a book already published...and that it had been proofread by a few people before it saw the light of Kindle-dom. Also in the addendum was an extract from Part Two of the series, where a character "...barley escaped with their life." Ouch.

 

What started out as the main plot - a character killed by a hired assassin - just fell apart at the 25% mark into recondite and very...very...dull real estate jargon. It wasn't moving the plot along, so I skimmed it to the end of the chapter, where another real estate board meeting was taking place, filled with more boardroom jargon. I skimmed that as well, then decided it wasn't going to get any better and dropped it.

 

Sorry, Mr Danley. You pretty much lost my interest when you spent a chapter talking about how the assassin came to name his cat.