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Charles Dickens, Mark Ford

I Am Number Four (Lorien Legacies, Book 1)

I Am Number Four (Lorien Legacies, Book 1) - Pittacus Lore * Spoilers *Some poor sentence construction and odd typos spoiled the book for me. In one instance, a character makes themselves invisible, and the narrator tell us that she looks around. How did he know that?Also, I can think of better ways of casting a passive sentence than:His hands are bound behind him, his ankles tied to the legs of the chair in which he is sitting.How about:His hands are bound behind him, his ankles tied to the legs of the chair.